From the last consultation, I managed to do the necessary edits and also produced ‘two’ more shots…one of which involved a head-turn that took me hours to do. (NOTE TO SELF: Listen to your peers, and do a 3D model of your character to help with reference).
So after putting in the new shots and edits into my improved animatic, I showed it to Mr. Ronald. Sad to say, there still was a problem with Shots 6&7 and 8&9.
* I should not be tweening the walk cycle in Shots 8 & 9. I should be animating it bit by bit. This can take a lot of layers and a long while…
* Use a dissolve transition between Shots 6&7 and Shots 8&9.
* The wind in Shots 8&9 should be thinner.
* In Shots 6&7, the two male bunnies walking in the background should alternate.
Guess these edits should be left till after production or the next scheduled break. Mr. Ronald also pointed out some minor edits in a few more shots:
* In Shot 21, the feet should lift off faster.
* In Shot 32, raindrops should be added on the trees and character.
This is all for now…I shall continue with production. Mid-review critiques are tomorrow and Wednesday.
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