21 October 2009- Slight story edit

I had dental appointment today, so did not go for consultation. Don’t worry, I have LOA.

Anyway, after thinking about going for anthropomorphic characters, I decided that ‘Fading Light’ is too dark for such potentially adorable characters (since when animals are not cute?) so I decided to do a few edits (though the edited story may sound more like Edward Scissorhands now):

*Change the title from ‘Fading Light’ to ‘Please Be My Friend’.

* Change the dark macabre grungy town at night to a happy cheery forest at daytime…simpler to draw trees than buildings.

* Give the story a happy ending: unlike ‘Fading Light’ where the protagonist ‘corrodes’ and dies, in ‘Please Be My Friend’, the protagonist finds a friend.

So yes, these are the edits I made…only problem now is the character designs.

For the design of the protagonist, I want it to be an animal that people find…”taboo” or something.
I am thinking:

* Dog (unclean to some people)

* Pig (unclean to some people)

* Goat/Ram (represents The Devil to some people)

Will consult again with Mr. Ronald tomorrow…